This one is defiantly better than the first gymnastic one you posted, as you can see her face. I do not think it is always necessarily needed to be able to see the full features of the face, when you are depicting an artistic pose and flowing shape, this sport is not called Artistic Gymnastics for nothing. I am of the opinion that a face showing emotion and passion is desirable in most sports photography.
Really striking composition, Martin. The geometrical and almost abstract simplicity of the elements makes for a very strong visual design and a powerful, clear description of the activity. It’s a very elegant photograph that a newspaper photoeditor would grab with both hands!